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Post by AreaMan on Nov 24, 2006 18:18:59 GMT -5
I figure I'd make my own short series. The alliance is really hard, but these sprites are so much better. Lol, I liked maaking this. And yes, X is supposed to have a British accent.
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MewThrustSP
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Post by MewThrustSP on Nov 24, 2006 18:49:49 GMT -5
lol. no lol times 50
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Crystalman.EXE
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Post by Crystalman.EXE on Nov 24, 2006 22:45:17 GMT -5
not bad... humor is good, concept is good, the sprites are a little.... squised... but it looks good. The panels are a bit too big, but it seems to fit wit h the diolouge. also, try to keep the diolouge IN THE BOX. If it rubs the edges it looks bad.
One mistake, is BIG backround, LITTLE sprites. for the amount of diolougue, you can get away with it, but in any other situation, it can be a major problem.
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Post by AreaMan on Nov 25, 2006 14:24:36 GMT -5
Yes, Thank CrystalMan . i was actually waiting for you to say something about it. I'll take that advice to heart.
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Crystalman.EXE
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Post by Crystalman.EXE on Nov 25, 2006 14:53:31 GMT -5
Thanks. Like I said, you can get away with a humongo backround because you have so much diolouge.
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Post by HeatBlaze on Nov 25, 2006 15:08:12 GMT -5
I didn't really get it because it wasn't really funny to me. I don't recommend two or more sprite styles in like each box.
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Post by AreaMan on Nov 25, 2006 15:27:31 GMT -5
Lol, I forgot ot post the where the dialouge in the first three boxes from X is from Shakespeare.
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Post by AreaMan on Dec 27, 2006 17:31:54 GMT -5
Here's my newest comic. I'm still deciding wether I should make it a series or not.
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Post by Protomegabass on Dec 27, 2006 17:36:49 GMT -5
Lol Nice one!! This is a nice one so you making more causing this is funny
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Crystalman.EXE
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Post by Crystalman.EXE on Dec 30, 2006 22:20:21 GMT -5
Very nice. and finally SOMEONE RECOLORING BASS TO MAKE IT LOOK NORMAL! YAY!
People alwasy complain that you can't use Bass sprites for 8-bit because therre are one. WELL I SHOWED THEM! I SHOWED THEM! HAH! *fires laser rifle randomly*
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Post by Protomegabass on Dec 30, 2006 22:23:35 GMT -5
Crystal >_< *gives chocolate to crystalman* Great Work S.Corps
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Post by AreaMan on Jan 8, 2007 18:07:32 GMT -5
My newest comic featuring AreaMan!! I'm still practicing as well.
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Post by HeatBlaze on Jan 8, 2007 22:36:56 GMT -5
Dude the 3rd top box is soooooooo friggin funny man.
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Crystalman.EXE
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Post by Crystalman.EXE on Jan 9, 2007 1:40:06 GMT -5
NICE! very nice.
Sprites are good, but the only major correction is Areaman's sprite, It seems too bright, and kinda... garbled.
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Post by AreaMan on Jan 24, 2007 17:43:43 GMT -5
Here's a little thing I just finished. I'm working the plot out for my comic's with AreaMan, so those might come soon.\
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