Zero20xd6
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Post by Zero20xd6 on Jun 12, 2007 20:17:29 GMT -5
I decided to write a story because I get bored and that this idea wouldn't get out've my head. __________________________________________________________ Prologue.
In the year 2200 the earth is a barren wasteland completely stripped of it's past glory. Many attempts were made to revitalize the Earth to it's previous state yet all failed. So they came up with an idea to create an atmosphere allowing humans to live there, all but one attempt was in vain. The group that managed to do this quickly flourished and became a great and powerful civilization known as the Martians. Yet they didn't forget about there Earth brethren but they only had fuel for a trip to earth and back for their mining systems wasn't fully established. So a group if scientist came up with the idea to have the earth re-created in cyberspace and connect everyone on Earth to it. They then thought that if they connected them to a chair that managed to keep them alive using a life support system that it would buy them enough time to mine enough fuel to mange at least one round trip. Mining the fuel took longer than expected and many on earth died living on as reincarnated souls on the Cyber-Earth now called Terra.
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Post by Zero20xd6 on Jun 14, 2007 20:29:45 GMT -5
Chapter 1 Upload.
A couple days ago the Martians sent over new technology allowing people to live on a recreated Earth in cyberspace. They say this new technology will save our world... in a sense, Today me and my family are being uploaded into the recreation of Earth. "Trey, Trey is something wrong you know we can't be late." shouted Trey's mom from downstairs. "No, nothings wrong. I'm on my way down."replied Trey. Trey starts running down the steps and jumps down the last few. "Alright mom I'm ready lets get going."states Trey. "Okay, okay I'll be right out."responded Trey's mom. Minutes later they're speeding down an abandoned highway to where their V.R.C's(Virtual Reality Chairs) are located. After a long and tedious ride they finally reach their destination. Jumping out of the vehicle sprints towards the building eager to finally leave this barren wasteland. As Trey is about to enter the building a robotic voice hisses "State your name" "Um, Trey Davis" "Very well, you may enter. Just follow the main hall to the V.R.C's and sit down in a empty one." "Alright. thanks."says Trey as he's sprinting in the direction of the V.R.C's. Sitting down in the nearest one. Trey felt rush wind and then bright light causing him to close his eyes. Reopening his eyes Trey saw he was in a different room. Heading down the nearest hall he noticed an exit to his left. Making quick left he bolted towards the exit. "Hello. Are you new here?"said the receptionist. "Um"said Trey scratching the back of hi."Where are we exactly?" "On Terra. Since this clearly your first time here you can go with the tour group that's just about to leave." "Okay thanks."Says Trey walking. "Other way" "My bad." states Trey walking away in what was hopefully the right direction. After taking a couple of steps Trey spots a group of people outside. "This must be the Tour Group."thought Trey. Walking up towards them through the door which slid electronically open. While walking towards them he notices a thick line in the ground. Paying no attention to trey steps over it. "Did my arms just get heavier"Trey thought"Whatever must be some sort of glitch in Terra. "Hey is this the group for the tour?"Asks Trey as he finally reaches the group. "No it's not."says a huge man in what appears to be armor."You might want to get out of here before you get deleted. After all you are in the Combat Zone..."A giant blade ripped through the man's chest data shot out in a way that blood would back on Earth. "You... You killed him."states Trey. Without responding the man lifts the blade up and swipes at Trey. Who was no Ducking down to avoid the blow. When the man swiftly brought the blade on top of him. Data shot out of Trey. "So this is how I die accidentally walking into some place."Thought Trey."It's funny though I thought it would be more painful."
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Post by Zero20xd6 on Jun 20, 2007 20:41:13 GMT -5
A comment would be nice _________________________________________ * * *
"Man, dad I didn't realize going camping would be such a good idea!" "I told you that you were going to have fun. Didn't I?" "Yeah, I guess you did." "Just make sure you don't wander off into the Combat Zone." "Fine, but how will I know if I do?" "Maybe if your walking a sword appears in your hand it could be a hint." "Yeah stupid question." "We should be heading back to camp." "Yeah I guess." Father and son headed back to camp when off in the distance an unknown creature stood watching. Later that night when they all went to sleep the unknown creature walked into camp. Quietly it slashed down upon the nearest tent. Yet it made enough noise to wake someone nearby. Climbing out of the tent the boy's father saw a grotesque sight standing in front of him was a monster robed in all black with a hood over his head but underneath the hood a human skull sat. The thing wielded a scythe and was readying to slash with it try to duck out of the way but moving to slowly the father's head was lopped off and the data shot into the grotesque creature. Then after the creature finished that kill he went on to kill all in the camp.
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