Post by silvermane16 on Apr 3, 2007 1:44:00 GMT -5
This is a Fanfic I wrote during class(last period social studies. ughh it lasts forever) I decided then Ill continue with it. Already made first two scenes. Please give comments about what you think of it and some tips
The World’s fate
Part 1
Scene 1
In the world of advanced technology the old ways have been forgotten. Some have tried to revive them and have failed. The rulers of this world has taking out every one who knows of the old ways and the past. But one still lives. One who not only knows of the past but of why the rulers are so scared of it. For many years the rulers have tried to hunt him down but they have failed at each attempt. At every one of his scenes he leaves the message “fgthaihetveleeml” The rulers cannot decipher the code but they will some day they will….
Currently in ACDC a stranger heads toward the town coming from the airport. He is not known but in everybody’s mind they think “is he a friend or foe?” Silently the stranger heads toward a restaurant and sits down to eat. He orders, eats, then leaves looking for a place to stay.
All of a sudden shots ring out in the air! The police are trying to shoot at the stranger but miss. The stranger then all of a sudden disappears. What is he doing here, who is he, and what does fgthaihetveleeml mean?
The Worlds Fate
Part 1
Scene 2
At the Hikari household.
MegaMan: Lan wake up it's time for school!
Lan: Shut up you stupid program
MegaMan: ............
MegaMan turns on the alarm program on the highest volume
MegaMan: WAKE UP LAN!!!!
The whole house shakes from the noise and Lan is forced to wake up
Lan: Frickin Navi always waking me up. I asked Dad for a robo pet but nooooo he had to give me my annoying little brother that can bug me even more!
MegaMan: I HEARD THAT!!!
One the way to school there is a huge barricade blocking the entrances to ACDC. Lan notices and then decides to ask Maylu later.
At school
Dex: hey Lan whats wrong with you looks like you didn't get enough sleep last night.
Lan: all because of my annoying navi..
MegaMan: Oh ya! Without me you would be on the streets not even knowing where you live!
Lan: Ya ya now shut up
Maylu: you shouldnt talk to your navi like that Lan
Lan: YOU SHUT UP TOO!!!!
Maylu: .............(punches him right in the stomach as hard as she can)Dont talk to me like that!
Lan: In.....pain.....someone....help.........medic.....
Ms. Mari: okay class. Class is canceled due to trouble in town so instead you will get 10 times as much homework.
Lan: In....pain......someone.....kill....me.....
The World’s fate
Part 1
Scene 1
In the world of advanced technology the old ways have been forgotten. Some have tried to revive them and have failed. The rulers of this world has taking out every one who knows of the old ways and the past. But one still lives. One who not only knows of the past but of why the rulers are so scared of it. For many years the rulers have tried to hunt him down but they have failed at each attempt. At every one of his scenes he leaves the message “fgthaihetveleeml” The rulers cannot decipher the code but they will some day they will….
Currently in ACDC a stranger heads toward the town coming from the airport. He is not known but in everybody’s mind they think “is he a friend or foe?” Silently the stranger heads toward a restaurant and sits down to eat. He orders, eats, then leaves looking for a place to stay.
All of a sudden shots ring out in the air! The police are trying to shoot at the stranger but miss. The stranger then all of a sudden disappears. What is he doing here, who is he, and what does fgthaihetveleeml mean?
The Worlds Fate
Part 1
Scene 2
At the Hikari household.
MegaMan: Lan wake up it's time for school!
Lan: Shut up you stupid program
MegaMan: ............
MegaMan turns on the alarm program on the highest volume
MegaMan: WAKE UP LAN!!!!
The whole house shakes from the noise and Lan is forced to wake up
Lan: Frickin Navi always waking me up. I asked Dad for a robo pet but nooooo he had to give me my annoying little brother that can bug me even more!
MegaMan: I HEARD THAT!!!
One the way to school there is a huge barricade blocking the entrances to ACDC. Lan notices and then decides to ask Maylu later.
At school
Dex: hey Lan whats wrong with you looks like you didn't get enough sleep last night.
Lan: all because of my annoying navi..
MegaMan: Oh ya! Without me you would be on the streets not even knowing where you live!
Lan: Ya ya now shut up
Maylu: you shouldnt talk to your navi like that Lan
Lan: YOU SHUT UP TOO!!!!
Maylu: .............(punches him right in the stomach as hard as she can)Dont talk to me like that!
Lan: In.....pain.....someone....help.........medic.....
Ms. Mari: okay class. Class is canceled due to trouble in town so instead you will get 10 times as much homework.
Lan: In....pain......someone.....kill....me.....